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-Can you use an English spelling checker? There's a few problems, such as the name of CompanyName is spelled wrong
-Add lots more details about your role, explain the situation and activity you did. Are you on a team or alone? What is the size of the project? Is the customer SMB, Mid Market, Enterprise? What is the result? For result, use metrics or % is best to read.
-Add all of your technical skills. On LinkedIn you have HTML5, SQL, Java, Javascript, etc. Do you have more ? Add everything.
-Check the work dates? You wrote: June 2017-Current. Is that accurate?
直しませう。